Cidney Swanson

Book One in the Ripple Series

Rippler

Eleanor Luhar

This book is available for free on Kindle devices and apps over on Amazon, which is where I downloaded it from.

The book begins with Sam "rippling" - become invisible in front of her friends. No one sees it happening (assuming she just fell in the river) except for Will. From here, the two of them form a close bond, and Will tells Sam about the research his sister has been doing into Rippler's Syndrome.

Researchers studying the Rippler gene have mysteriously died, leaving Sam, Will and his sister Mickie to assume they were murdered. They need to be careful to avoid being found - especially since two of the trio have the gene themselves.

Sam also discovers the truth about her mother's death when she was young, which has some unexpected links to the murder of the researchers. Mickie becomes more and more fearful for the safety of her little brother, and Sam finds herself afraid of losing Will when Mickie considers moving them away.

The Rippler gene is a fantastic idea, plausible and well thought through. The symptom of the gene - the turning invisible - haven't been explained particularly well yet, but that may come later in the series.

I did find the writing a little amateurish at times; the phrase "she/he/it was explained" was repeated quite often in place of actually writing the explanation. I'm not sure if this was to avoid lengthy descriptions of things that had already taken place or just to avoid having to write it out in detail, but it was something I noticed often. Also, Swanson tries to avoid repeating names and uses what reminds me a school-child method; describing the person, calling them things like "my mother" or "his big sister" in place of simply writing their name.

There are some aspects of romance, but they have yet to be fully developed. There's also friendship drama, where Sam's friend, Gwyn, believes her to be in an abusive relationship. This assumption was possibly a bit too dramatic and far-fetched, but the idea of Sam being torn between Gwyn and Will was good.

I enjoyed reading this book, and am thinking about reading the next novel in the series. However, I definitely did notice where improvements could have been made. 3.5 stars.

Rippler Book One in the Ripple Series

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