Reviews
I loved this book. The twists and turns and the characters are just so well written. I’m excited to read the second one!
One of my favourite! The plot was great fun. I love the healthy dynamics between the love interest who love each other but are split by secrets and lies. Beautiful family and a love interest that I really nice !
I gotta say the beginning was good, the middle was very slow and I think could have absolutely been cut in half, and then the ending was good, I enjoyed the romance but I was relieved when the third act conflict hit just because the middle was soooo slow. overall enjoyed the book and I am excited for the sequel
I almost went into a book slump because of this book. I probably won’t be reading the second book anytime soon.
This reminded me of graceling at the beginign but I loved the ending and the story and I rlly want to read the next one
04/05/2024 Kazi and Jase just feel like home to me. Their hardships and thoughts are far too intertwined with my own to part. I might've only now realised that there's a resonance between what Kazi does to protect herself and what I do at times (not on the same scale, of course, but the idea remains the same), she shelters herself behind silence and distance, trying to carry the weight of pain alone without ever showcasing vulnerability which in her eyes equates to weekness. Her kindness despite everything she's been true is truly admirable and inspiring. I've also realised why I love Jase so much. Why, along the way, much like Kazimyrah, I couldn't help but fall in love with his stubbornness and unfaltering will. He stands his ground, and despite being a blind fool driven by his own ego, you can not help but sympathise. In my case, I understand far too well his strong-willed stubbornness, the consequences that come from it. And most of all, I admired his devotion. Devotion to family, to promises, to convictions, but most telling of all to Kazi. Despite everything, the lies "the unsaid truths," as they like to call them, the secrets, he remained steadfast like a rock unmoving against a churning river. To conclude this long introspection, I loved this book, and you should DEFINITELY pick it up. Or else... 16/03/2021 Ajdgfjdhfgj! I was afraid I would lose interest in this book since it's been a while, but OMG, this BOOK- I can't even First and foremost, the MCs: Kazimyrah & Jase; These characters are so realistic and raw! They have fears and secrets they want to keep hidden from others. Jase and Kazi are complete opposites to each other, though they do have some traits in commun such as their determination and their desire to protect. Jase is out-spoken, prideful, and just a wonderful character. He prioritises his family and his duty over everything else. He emanates kindness and honesty. Even though he tries to hide it. Kazi is better suited in the shadows (her words, not mine), she, too, is kind but for other reasons entirely. Kazi is one of my all-time favourite characters. Her trauma is so well dealt with; i found myself tearing up simply from the way she talked about herself. She isn't prideful, nor is she one to show weekness. However, she puts on a show to whomever she chooses as a target. "Always juggling," THE PLOT; despite being a character driven book, the plot kept me on my toes. The stakes were high and reasonable. Every plot point was caused by desicion and not by circumstance, which i love. The metaphors were on point, and i found MANY quotes i adore. The humour took me by surprise. Despite being a heavy fantsay book with much tension, pockets of humourous scenes can be found. I remember laughing in the dead of night at one of the scenes, my brother thought me mad. Oh, and the writing!!! Lyrical and seamless. The words flowed as gently as a river. I kept turning pages without even taking time into account. Two sittings. That's all it took for me to start and finish this book. I have to admit that i don't regret sleeping at 4 am. just to finish this masterpiece of a book. NO REGRETS AT ALL. THE ENDING (dun, dun, dun...) I find that endings could make or break the story altogether, and LET ME TELL YOU the ending did not disappoint. I saw reviews complaining that the ending was rushed, but um... NO. It was perfect. Plus, there are many things to solve in the sequel. The ending was sAtIsFyInG!!!!! to say the least. Ok, i'm going to stop raving about this book. 28/12/2019 Absolutely loved it!!! I even pulled an all-nighter just to finish it, and at the very end, I just couldn’t finish it, so I savoured every word in the last 10 pages. I can’t wait to read the sequel !!!
(3.5) Ending was rushed and came at an end too quickly. Other than that, there were some cringy lines but overall pretty cool.
4.5*
so much happening but nothing at the same time.
Ive been really wanting to read enemy to lovers and this did not disappoint. The beginning was a bit rough/ feel the lore of the world could have been explained a bit more up front. But enjoyed!
4’5/5 this book… finished it in a couple hours and GAWDDDDDD it was good started of a bit slow but it was so good truly kazi<3
Dance of Thieves is an incredible read from the first to the last page. The pacing is perfect, nothing felt rushed and it never felt like you were stuck in one moment for too long. Whilst the miscommunications between Jase and Kazi are frustrating at times, I love both their characters, and the range of other characters that support them. The world building - in terms of the Ballenger family and Hell’s Mouth - is great. Whilst the overall plot of the story was largely predictable, the smaller details of the story remained largely unpredictable and added greater meaning to the overall story. Dance of Thieves is vibrant, and a great fantasy read.
it was fine but nothing to write home about. it’s not one i would necessarily recommend but i’m not mad i read it
"You’ve infected me with a poison that I don’t want to flush out, because you’re a mad viper twisting around my middle, cutting off my breath, yet I want you more than I want to breathe."
4 ⭐'s
This is a fascinating story of forbidden love, loyalty and a whole lot of hypocrisy. It has taken me FAR too long to start this book. I bought Dance of Thieves a long time ago and it has sat on my Kindle shelf forever and I was about to pick it up when my friends recommended I read The Remnant Chronicles first. I am so glad I followed her advice because I think reading the trilogy first really helped understand the story better. This story follows Kazi and Jase, Kazi is a streetrat thief turned trusted Rahtan warrior, she is on a mission to investigate treaty violations following The Great Battle six years ago and to track down Captain Illarion for Queen Lia after he managed to escape justice for his crimes at the end of The Beauty of Darkness . Jase is the newly appointed Patrei to the Ballenger family, the head of a lawless family who claim to be the first Kingdom on the continent descended from the Ancients.
I had high hopes for this book right from the beginning, I was immediately absorbed into the story and loved the pacing initially, but it started to get a bit dry in the middle and then I found the ending too rushed. I fell in love with Jase and Kazi while they were out in the wilderness and I was curious to see how they would handle their budding relationship once they got back to civilisation. I loved how open and kind Jase was, his passion for his culture and his protectiveness towards his people was very admirable, and the stories he told where so touching and beautiful. Kazi was also amazing, I really had to sympathise with where she had come from and how she had grown to such a loyal and fierce soldier. I loved her sisterhood with Wren and Synové so much, and it made sense why she remained so guarded towards Jase as they got to know each other. The hot and cold, enemies to lovers to enemies to lovers, back and forth between them was equally thrilling and frustrating. I was rooting for them right from the beginning but I just wish there hadn't been so many lies, deceptions and hypocrisy between them. I know some of this is necessary to be able to drive this type of plot forward but there were points where I just wanted to throttle them both.
Unfortunately when they did get back to civilisation it started to drag a bit in the middle. We got some really beautiful moments with the Vendan settlement and with the Ballenger's tight knit family being so accepting of Kazi, Wren and Synové - it really hurt knowing that they would betray them after all of that. I kept holding out hope that Kazi would just explain to Jase why she was really there and he would help her but it never came. I think this book ended up being just a little bit too long with these scenes drawn out too much. These overly lengthy but also wonderfully poetic scenes were then compared to the rushed ending of the story and it just didn't end up working 100% for me.
SPOILER
Once they get back to Venda with Jase, it all felt too easy. Everyone is threatening him with the noose and then suddenly Kazi is very easily persuading everyone to simply let him go and all of her anger at him for hiding Zane from her is just forgotten. It felt like a rush to give them a happy ending for book 1 when it might have worked better to end on more of a cliff hanger between them two.
END SPOILER
I really enjoyed this book but I do feel like it struggled to accomplish what it was hoping to. I imagined the Ballenger's as similar to the Shelby's from The Peaky Blinders and I think if this book was written more New Adult then we could've really gotten some heavy, gritty lawless, morally grey angst out of them but instead it felt like this book wanted to focus more on the purity of the romance between Jase and Kazi. I will absolutely be reading Vow of Thieves straight up next and am looking forward to it, but I think this series will be a solid four stars for me in the end.
2.75 stars
absolutely jaw dropping, my tears stained the damn pages, it was so good and so nice to read! i had a hard time getting into the book at first because of the heavy world that kazi and jase lived in but i just couldn't put it down once i started getting immersed in it!! absolute golden book, everyone should read this!!!
THIS WAS SO GOOD ??????? and how am I supposed to study for my physics exam tmrw with that ending??? LIKE I WONT BE ABLE TO FUCKING FUNCTION AT ALL WITHOUT READING THE SECOND BOOK
this was cute, entertaining. not much action. but i really did enjoy it nonetheless.
4.75 stars. now this is an interesting one, it was a struggle to fully understand what the history was in the first 5 or so chapters of the book. i actually realized later on that there was whole trilogy that i should’ve read before this (but the covers are ugly so i won’t be doing that). however, the book was really good, the world building and characterization were fantastic and the writing was stellar. plus the angst and longing between the kazi and jase while constantly trying to deceive each other was enemies-to-lovers gold. its definitely one of the few ya fantasy books that i consider top tier.
I’ve read this book three or four times in the span of a few months This is definitely one of my favorite books of all time Jase and Kazi keep me going 5 star fantasy romance 🌿🌿🌿
I enjoyed every moment in this book. I didn’t love it, but it is still a great book. The story was told well and I never knew who to trust. I would definitely recommend reading the Remnant Chronicles before this. The story has more meaning and the picture is a lot clearer if you know everything from those books.
I LOVED THIS BOOK!
It was in no way the plot that I thought it would be but I don't mind haha
It took me a second to get into it because I didn't read the series before but I understood everything just fine so I'm glad I didn't have to read the other series. Once I understood the world building and plot points it was such an enjoyable read. It did take me longer than normal but I actually liked that because if i really love a book I want it to never end haha
The ending made me a bit naseous but I think it was obvious to everyone that something was about to happen. And I guess something did.😭
I loved how Jase immediately forgot that she basically betrayed him and still loved her with everything he has. (This is better not a scheme of him!) He was right to forgive het straight away because my girl never did anything wrong actually. They should thank her on their knees kissing her feet actually.
I'm a bit anxious about the second book and by a bit I mean VERY. But I hope it'll be more about war or something and not them betraying and lying to each other AGAIN.
The queen is definitely my favorite character. Sometimes it dragged on but I enjoyed the read vv good
Very dull plot but beautiful cover.
Highlights
"No one did anything," I answered quietly. "Then hold on to me," he said. "Let me show you the stars."
The family dynasty—those both blood and embraced—was safe
“Every exchange of words between Jase and me seemed like a dance, a step forward, a step back, circling, both of us leading, anticipating, wondering what the next move would be. He didn’t trust me any more than I trusted him.” - kazi
He crossed the room, and no one tried to stop him. He walked up the steps and lookey down at me, his eyes searching mine, and then he pulled me into his arms, crushing me, his face nestled in my hair.
"I already told you," he whispered in my ear, "and I won't take it back. I love you, Kazi of Brightmist, and I will never stop loving you, not through a thousand tomorrows. Come back with me. Please."
AHHHHHHH
"Just so we know we have the story straight, you two are posing as husband and wife?"
Eben set down the pot of water he had just filled, and Natiyah paused from mincing scallions, the silence long and full.
"No," Eben answered. "We're not posing." And then he went back to his work.
They weren't even in this book really and I'm still so invested in them haha idk they seem so cute together
My thoughts galloped as fast as Mije, and somewhere in my head I heard desperate words that couldn't be mine. I do want tomorrows with you, Jase. I want a lifetime of tomorrows.
If they don't end up together in the very end I will be so upset
The truth was my ankle was still tender, but Jase seemed to sense this in spite of my protest, and he limited our dancing to gentle swaying.
"I think this is the least we can do to warm the chill between these two camps," I said.
"So this is all for show?"
"What do you think?"
"I think I don't care anymore, as long as you're in my arms."
I lay there next to her, and even though the healer assured me she would be fine, I pressed my fingers to her wrist, feeling the thrum of her pulse.
I can't promise you any tomorrows.
And that was all I wanted.
🦋
I hoped Mason was wrong. I hoped I was wrong. Because I was still tangled up with her and I didn't want to be cut loose.
I lay on my back and he hovered next to me, propped on one elbow. His finger traced a line along my jaw. He didn't ask anymore what had been done to me. Not it seemed he only wanted to erase it, wash it from my memory, and for now, I let him.
They are so cute😭 I dread the time when they return to being enemies
"What did they do to you, Kazi?" His voice was low, earnest. Even in the dim light, I was able to see the worry in his eyes.
I pretended I didn't know what he was talking about. "Who did what?"
"Who made you afraid of an open world? An open sky? Was it Venda? Your parents?"
"No one did anything," I answered quietly.
"Then hold on to me," he said. "Let me show you the stars."
OH MY FUCKING GOD
"It's akward, isn't it?" he said.
"What's that?" I replied, my voice far too breathy.
"These moments when we're not hating each other."
AHHHH
I stared at her, swallowed, my thoughts suddenly jumbled.
"Well?" she asked. I knew the answer but I drew it out, offering several wrong answers, making her laugh once. It was the first time I had seen her laugh, genuine, without any pretense, and it filled me with a strange burst of heat.
"The moon," I finally answered.
Our gazes held, and she seemed to know what I was doing.
"Tell me another one," I said.
And she did. A dozen more, until her lids grew heavy and she finally fell asleep.
I love them already
"I watched you in the wagon. Your chest. For a while, I didn't see a move at all. I thought you were dead."
I didn't quite know how to respond. "You were watching my chest?"
He stopped, looked at me, suddenly looking akward and young and not like a ruthless killer at all. "I mean-" He began walking again. "What I meant was, I eas watching to make sure you were still breathing. You were out cold."
I smiled - somewhere deep inside me so he wouldn't see. It was refreshing to see him flustered for a change.
AHHHH page 70 and they are already beginning to be cute haha
I weighted the advantages and costs of every word and action before I acted. Some saw me as aloof. Mason said, with admiration, that it made me a stone-cold bastard, but this girl had pushed me to a reckless burning edge i didn't even recognize, and her calm reply only pushed me further.
She knew something about survival. I wondered if she might even know more than me.
I stopped abruptly and stepped in her path to block her, the question I promised myself I wouldn't ask bubbling up anyway. "Why don't you like me?"
She stared at me, confused. "What?"
"Back at the river, you said that you don't like me. I want to know why."
Adorable hah
"We just got out of the river. Why didn't you pee there?"
"Maybe because I was doing this little thing called fighting for my life."
"You mean I was fighting for your life. You just went along for the ride."
"Turn around," I ordered.
"Turn my back on you?"
I smiled. "Don't worry," I answered, spitting his own words back into his face, "I wouldn't want to be chained to a dead weight. You're safe, pretty boy."
"I don't even get a riddle first?"
I narrowed my eyes.
He slowly turned. "Hurry."
Love this banter
"Lean back!" he yelled. "Cross your legs! Feet forward!" Jase pulled me so I was between his arms, leaning back against his chest, rapids splashing over us, spinning us, but each time he righted our course and we shot down the river like aimless leaves swept away on its surface.
I LOVE a struggles-to-swim × keeps-her-on-the-surface scene haha it's my kryponite
“I love you, Jase Ballenger."
“I know" he said. "I've always known."
“My tomorrows are yours, Jase. I want them all to be with you.”
YASSS
“ai already told you," he whispered in my ear, “and I won't take it back. I Iove vou. Kazi of Brightmist, and I will never stop loving you, not through a thousand tomorrows. Come back with me. Please."
oh my god
I stared at her, the air punched out of me, but then, the glimmer again-I saw the glimmer in her eyes, and it struck me. I understood what she was doing.
lias playing matchmaker LMFAO
“The queen will get here when she gets here, but if you wake my baby daughter one more time, I'll pop your head from your shoulders. Understand?"
“Who are you?" I asked.
"A man who has had very little sleep in the past forty-eight hours. But to you I am King Jaxon."
RAFE RAFE RAFE
"I love you. I love you with every breath. with every thought that's inside me. I've loved you from the first time I kissed you on that ledge. Even before that."
please.
“You love her?”
I looked up at him. Love didn't even seem like the right word to explain how I felt about her. The word seemed too small, too used, too simple, and everything I felt about her seemed complicated and rare and as wide as the world. I nodded.
WHEN IS IT MY TYRN