Do-Tol Hwang

The First Night with the Duke

I personally didn't like this story.

1) One of the major problems I have is that it glosses over the fact that the MC took advantage of how drunk the FL was. Then he acts as if he didn't and how the FL was the one who took advantage of him and therefore owed him.

2) I also didn't understand how the FL fell in love with ML. When she finally managed to get him to quit, she decided to run back to him. I understood that they were getting closer, but it still didn't feel like enough for them to be in love.

3) Throughout the story, neither character experienced much character development. The little development they had was made to cover up plot holes or actions that made no sense in terms of context.

The First Night with the Duke

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