Fonda Lee

Shannon Lee

A young warrior dreams of proving his worth in the elite Guardian Tournament, fighting not only for himself but the fate of everything he loves.

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Breath of the Dragon

THERE ARE NO DRAGONS, ZERO, I WAS LIED TO.

now that that's out of the way, let's start on a positive note, the world building is simple yet charming, so is the writing. 

if you want a fun, not very serious book with martial arts featured to pass the time, this won't be your worst choice.

okay I usually don't criticize the plot points of a book, because whether or not a plot point is seen as good/bad, can be so heavily subjective; but, the plotting of this was just sooo odd. it felt like there were no high or low points, no twists or fun moments. 

the last 20% felt like it shouldve either been extended or compeletlycut and put into the next book

there are sooo many fight scenes in this and not one excited me(granted I'm a very hard to excite hag). don't get me wrong, the technicallies of the fights are very well written and obviously well-researched, the authors do an impressive job with descriptions as well, but they fail to make you care, every fight just blends into the other 20.

mehrsa

THERE ARE NO DRAGONS, ZERO, I WAS LIED TO.

now that that's out of the way, let's start on a positive note, the world building is simple yet charming, so is the writing. 

if you want a fun, not very serious book with martial arts featured to pass the time, this won't be your worst choice.

okay I usually don't criticize the plot points of a book, because whether or not a plot point is seen as good/bad, can be so heavily subjective; but, the plotting of this was just sooo odd. it felt like there were no high or low points, no twists or fun moments. 

the last 20% felt like it shouldve either been extended or compeletlycut and put into the next book

there are sooo many fight scenes in this and not one excited me(granted I'm a very hard to excite hag). don't get me wrong, the technicallies of the fights are very well written and obviously well-researched, the authors do an impressive job with descriptions as well, but they fail to make you care, every fight just blends into the other 20.

everything else was unremarkable/fine.

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