
Kingdoms of Shadow and Ash
Reviews

Where to begin? So I am trying to compose myself after pushing to get through this book. It. Was. A. Struggle. First, I have never been so confused in my life with a book. I felt like I was starting in the middle of a book not the beginning. You are just thrust into a scene and a kingdom with no explanation. The characters as well are just kind of thrust at you and you are like, wait, did I skip something? Were they already introduced and I missed it? With this kind of writing (at least for me) I couldn't grow attached to or resonate with any of the characters. Second, the 5 kingdoms and the ones that we are just dropped into have little to no detail or world-building. While this might not be problematic for some it is a huge no for me. Yes, you can overdo it but to have barely anything at all leaves me feeling like something is lacking. This could have been an epic story, with I am sure some amazing characters that I could have loved and grown attached to but the writing was just so lacking and missing so much detail that I couldn't get through this. With barely any character-building/backstories or world-building, it just fell really short for me. Again, this is my opinion.