Name: Beautifully Damaged
Rating: 4.2 (5 reviews)

L.A. Fiore

Beautifully Damaged

Priyanka

4.5 damaged stars! LOVED this book! Trace, you're now in my 'too-hot-to-resist' list. This story was amazing! A total twister. The story begins in a club where they both: Ember and Trace, meet for the first time. As the story continues, we find them becoming friends and slowly, lovers. Trace has a lot of darkness within him and it is upto Ember to save him. The storyline is awesome; unpredictable but at the same time unrealistic. Nevertheless, it is really awesome :D There are lot of grammatical mistakes and this is a major drawback of the book. This book is in severe need of editing. The phrase 'he/she offered...' (Can't you just write 'said'?!) and '...before he/she...' is repeated many times. In addition to that (This might sound weird) the characters were very polite; as in formal. Too much formality. I don't think friends act with each so formally. Unrealistic plot as mentioned before. A bit slow-paced as many facts/dialogues/Ember's thoughts are repeated. Inpsite of the drawbacks, I loved this book a lot! PS: A small request to the author: Can you rewrite the book in Trace's POV? God, he's just adorable! :)

Beautifully Damaged

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