Shani Greene-Dowdell

Love Will Keep Us

Jo H

I have to wonder if all the other reviewers of this "book" read the same story I did! This is a prime example of an amateurish self-published nightmare and I wish so much I could gain back the time it took to read it. 

Also, I don't write many reviews and when I do I'm not usually so... mean, but this was just a horrific reading experience IMO.

The situation described in the blurb was only introduced at around 73% read (chapter 17 of 20 + epilogue, page 83 of 113 in my kobo) and was barely touched upon, the h called her loving mother in law Mrs. Hathaway, it felt to me like it was trying hard to be an erotic Christian love story with examples such as 
We sat down and ate dinner together. But first, I said a prayer for our small, but growing family. 
“Most holy, righteous and everywhere present God. Our Father who art in Heaven, I ask for your blessing upon this food. Bless the heart and hands that prepared this lovely meal.” I glanced over at Kira and she was smiling wide. “And when it is our time to be a blessing to others, may we stand and be great stewards over the favors and blessings given to us. Blessings abound, in the name of Christ, our Great Redeemer.” 
It was the same prayer I’d said for years, and, so far, we’d been blessed.
the sex was horrible,  Licking his thin lips, I pried them open once again so that my thick tongue could assault his. “Oh, how I want to make love to you, Tenika. I have missed you so…” Kyle took me by my hand and led me to the center of our bed. He had his way with me for hours. “Are you ready to have my baby?” he asked teasingly, as my flower spread for him once again. “I love you, Kyle, and yes, I’ll have your ten babies. Give them all to me,” I cried out as he slid his cock against my blossoming flower and entered me. His pounding pleasure raided my core until he watered my flower with his love. As he released our third child from his loins, he placed a searing kiss against my lips with the promise of our forever love.
the h, Tenika not Tekah as per the blurb, was nasty to both her hubby and her forever 10 year old daughter (she is 10 at the start of the book and still is at the end when it's been at least seven months since Kyle's accident and the baby is crawling and standing), I could go on but I won't. But please, DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME, energy or money on this trite.

Love Will Keep Us

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