Monica Kayne

Merciless Heir

Jordan

2.5 ⭐️ // The beginning was so solid and then everything got messed up. From captive to spy? I don't think so. The progression of everything was off for me but I did like the band of brothers.

Well, I’m glad I got this book for free because every coin spent on it would have made me mad. This is an extremely shallow, ridiculously (not in the good way) fast paced wannabe dark mafia romance with all of the nogos there are:

-          Weak heroine turns badass killer martial artist within a few pages (and weeks in terms of timeline)

-          Big, bag, moody, grumpy Bratva boss has about as much depth to him as a half full glass of water (is also about as much see-through as one, too)

-          Plot is predictable as hell, characters are too obvious and also have not depth at all

-          More plot holes than a golf course

The only thing this book had going for itself was that I only noticed one spelling mistake. The style of writing was shallow and bordering on boring most of the time, there was no descriptive perspective to it and it felt like we were on a time and word limit.

This lacked on so many layer, I’m lacking the words to describe it. Don’t waste your time, read something else.

Leonie

Well, I’m glad I got this book for free because every coin spent on it would have made me mad. This is an extremely shallow, ridiculously (not in the good way) fast paced wannabe dark mafia romance with all of the nogos there are:

-          Weak heroine turns badass killer martial artist within a few pages (and weeks in terms of timeline)

-          Big, bag, moody, grumpy Bratva boss has about as much depth to him as a half full glass of water (is also about as much see-through as one, too)

-          Plot is predictable as hell, characters are too obvious and also have not depth at all

-          More plot holes than a golf course

-          Super mediocre spice

The only thing this book had going for itself was that I only noticed one spelling mistake. The style of writing was shallow and bordering on boring most of the time, there was no descriptive perspective to it and it felt like we were on a time and word limit.

This lacked on so many layer, I’m lacking the words to describe it. Don’t waste your time, read something else.

Haney Hayes PR

This was my first read of Kayne’s work. It was super quick. This is the first book in the Kozlov Empire series. It was a nice change of pace for me. Suspenseful mafia. Please check your trigger because you always should with a dark romance. There was so much action that I was on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what would happen next. A hot, dominant, and very dangerous Russian has me looking over my top-book boyfriends.

Merciless Heir

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