Reviews
beautiful and soft
Okay There were several very well written poems but there was too much repetition for my liking. Several poems were the same with a few words changed. I can understand this was done for emphasis but I found it to be annoying and a waste of space. There were also several pages of a “poem” with two words per line that I found to be very unnecessary.
Highlights
i have a life to garden. a multiverse to wake from sleep. giants
whether with a lover Ot none. i reek of love. i stink of love.
do not choose the lesser life. do you heat me. do you hear me. choose the life that is. yours. the life that is seducing your lungs. that is dripping down your chin.
i believe that everyone in the world. has one poem. that is their soulmate.
be easy. take yout time. you are coming home. to yourself. — the becoming wing
i am trying to remember you and let you go at the sarme time. - the mourn
'as you are’. says the universe. 'after...' you answer. 'as you are.’ says the universe. ‘before...’ you answer. 'as you are’. says the universe. ‘when...’ you answer. 'as you are’. says the universe. 'how...’ you answer. 'as you are.' says the universe. ‘why...' you answer. ‘because you are happening now. right now. right at this moment and your happening is beautiful. the thing that both keeps me alive and brings me to my knees. you don't even know how breathtaking you are. as you are.' says the universe through tears. as you are you are the prayer
and i heard her say, ‘you are afraid of love. but love is not afraid of you.’
grieve. so that you can be free to feel something else.
i wanted the wanting,
there was an evening in what you said.
put some honey and sea water by your bed. acknowledge. that your being needs sweetness and cleansing, that it is sore. that you are. soft. orishas
and all this red sand. black air. and loose life. falling into my skin. Snow island