Sloane St. James

Before We Came

Listen…It may go directly into my dnf and it’s definitely not because of the storyline. The writing bored me personally. I loved the storyline but the writing ? Honestly i’m not even halfway in the book (i’m 35% in )which’s sad. I’ve never commented on a writing but now ? 

It’s not even second chance romance ! They kissed once at the age of 7/8 and then she disappeared (enfait she got kidnapped…) 

If only someone can rewrite in better 😔

Reina Boo

Listen…It may go directly into my dnf and it’s definitely not because of the storyline. The writing bored me personally. I loved the storyline but the writing ? Honestly i’m not even halfway in the book (i’m 35% in )which’s sad. I’ve never commented on a writing but now ? 

It’s not even second chance romance ! They kissed once at the age of 7/8 and then she disappeared (enfait she got kidnapped…) 

If only someone can rewrite in better 😔

Before We Came

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