Ashley

JaQuavis

When Carter Diamon, the leader of The Cartel, which controls eighty percent of the cocaine industry, dies, his illegitimate son, Carter Jones, takes his place and starts sleeping with the enemy--Miamor, the leader of The Murder Mamas, who wants to take down The Cartel. Original.

The Cartel

Rachel

Well ok then. The Cartel is about this gang in Miami who runs the town. The father, Carter Diamond, is killed by a Haitian gang starting a gang war. His illegitimate son Carter Jones, steps in to take care of the family and run the cartel. He falls for a girl, Miamor, who is out for revenge on the cartel because one of the legitimate sons killed her sister who was trying to kill him. She has no idea Carter is related to the cartel, nor does Carter know that Miamor is a hitman for hire. Needless to say a mess ensues. The plot is interesting at most. The writing is TERRIBLE. There are so many typos, did anyone read through it? So much of the writing of what a character is repeated, even if its a different character. A character could be feeling one way in one paragraph and then the next in the next the character has moved on and stating the opposite without any reason. The plot kind of falls apart at the end and the actual ending isn't and ending just a cliffhanger for the next book which I won't be bothering to read.

This isn't my typical book and I read it because patrons at the library I work at are interested in it, so I understand the book and plot isn't aimed at me. With that said, the writing is just awful, the plot started off interesting, but the last 50 pages or so it went overboard.

The Cartel

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