Secret Baby
Reviews

slot going on and wished I read the first book now.... love that these two characters found happiness so was happy and want to know more about this family Loved every page

Needs Work This storyline had really great possibility but lacked depth. The writing style along with the flow of the story really needs to be addressed. There was no build up or really any angst. It was like the author would start moving towards what could turn into a great scene and then it would flop with no follow through. For instance when she goes to Colts with her box of proof of her story, you never experience the depth of the situation, he never goes through the box, you don't ever feel the emotion from her of what it would've felt like to lose a child, you don't see him begrudgingly believe or comfort her. Instead she shows up and says her short piece and he's pretty much like OK cool - wanna be a nanny?