
Undeclared
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I wanted to like this book so much. I loved the premise of it but I wanted more of the letters, more of a build up. It seemed very abrupt. One minute they were friends, the next they were deciding on more. I also felt like it was a bit slow going. I wanted more action. A decent read but not a favourite.

Check out this and my other reviews at My Blog ★Book Basics★ Genre : - Cont NA/YA Romance Series : - Book 1 in the series. Love triangle? - (view spoiler)[No (hide spoiler)] Cheating? - (view spoiler)[No (hide spoiler)] HEA? - (view spoiler)[Yes (hide spoiler)] Would I read more by this author/or in this series? - Yes Rating 4 stars ★Review★ When this popped up as free, I grabbed it straight away. Having read the Hitman series this author co wrote, and loved it, I was excited to try something else by her. Now, I tend to avoid NA, as I prefer my main characters older, not college aged, but I was intrigued enough by the blurb to try it. I have to admit, with the way it was written, with them meeting back up after having wrote to each other for years, then not hearing from each other, made me struggle to understand their connection. Their history was given through their letters, but again, these started with their earlier letters, so for me, the heartache the heroine felt, then their feelings for each other, felt too deep for what we knew up to that point. But, in saying that, I still enjoyed it. Noah, not the usual type of hero I read about, but he was very endearing. And I really enjoyed their story and build up to a relationship and being together. I would definitely continue with the series, even though as I say, I usually avoid NA.

Find this review and more on my blog... I hadn’t heard of this series until I picked up a review copy of the second novel, Unspoken, from NetGalley. I don’t like to start a series, even if they are standalones set in the same world, in the middle, so I bought this novel. Holy. Wow. I’m glad I did. I’ve always had a thing for men in uniform, both in real life and in books. Noah Jackson was absolutely no exception. My word. Even his name is hot. But, he’s way more than just a hot Marine/fighter. I can’t pigeon-hole him like that. “Lana harped on the unhealthy attachment I had in high school to a Marine with whom I had corresponded for four years. ‘Self-fulfilling’ and ‘self-destructive’ behavior were among the many therapy-speak phrases that Lana enjoyed whipping out.” This novel begins with the first letters written between a high school student and a Marine on active duty overseas. What began as part of an English composition class project grew into so, so much more. The letters pop up throughout the book and I loved reading about how Grace and Noah’s friendship evolved through the letters. Their banter was cute and charming. I connected immediately with both characters through their letters. I loved that they were used as a transitional piece between chapters, too. “The Marines may have made me a man, but Grace made me human. No matter what I told her in my letters, she accepted it and wrote me back something funny or sweet. She made me realize I could have more if I wanted it. And I wanted more bad.” Grace and Noah are reunited at college. He and his best friend, Bo, a fellow Marine and MMA fighter, have transferred from junior college in California to her school. Noah’s on a mission to win Grace back. Their attachment to each other had grown during the course of their letters. They were all set to begin a true relationship when he was finished with active duty. But, Noah was a mess. He needed some time before going to Grace, and instead of telling her that, he wrote her a letter and friend-zoned her. He regrets it every day and will do whatever it takes to win her trust and affection back. “It would be so easy to drop my defenses and tumble into his arms, but what would happen when he let go? I didn’t think I’d recover from the fall.” Grace is conflicted. She still has all the feelings for Noah, including the anger and resentment. She isn’t ready to forgive him yet, though, but agrees to try to rebuild the friendship. As they spend more and more time together, the attraction and feelings start to reach the boiling point. “The person I want to kiss isn’t really feeling me right now,” he half-joked. His eyes were warm, and I knew I was courting danger here. The old Noah wound healed up over the last year, and now I was threatening to slash it open and pour salt all over it. Noah was a genuinely good guy. He made some mistakes, the biggest one letting Grace think he didn’t care, but he’s trying to redeem himself. He was so obviously interested in her. He cared for her. He didn’t run and hook up with someone else when times got hard. That’s one of my biggest complaints about a number of the books I read. Boy likes girl, girl plays hard to get, boy screws everything in sight. It’s offensive and unrealistic. Thankfully that’s not an issue here. Noah isn’t interested in a cheap hook-up. He wants Grace. “Trust me to know my own feelings. Don’t assume you know what’s best for me.” I liked Grace a lot. I was able to identify with her. She’s insecure, innocent and slightly naive, but not dumbly so. She has a backbone. She’s relatively stubborn. She made Noah work to get back in her good graces. He didn’t just say some pretty words and she fell into bed with him. Real life isn’t that easy and book plots shouldn’t be either. I was able to relate to her as a photographer, too. That was an added bonus for me. “I felt like he was a marauder, invading my mouth and my senses.” I loved Grace and Noah together. They made for a wonderfully believable couple. Their attraction and chemistry was through the roof. I cheered for them throughout the entire novel. While there were some pretty steamy scenes, their relationship didn’t revolve around sex. They were friends first, albeit in an untraditional way, and their relationship grew from there. That’s how you know it was real. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. From the main characters to the secondary ones – especially Bo and Lana – to the dialogue and the storyline, it was a winner. I’m absolutely impressed with Jen Frederick’s work and look forward to reading many other fantastic books from her in the future. Works like this make me glad I take chances on indie authors. People who aren’t willing to just don’t know what they’re missing.








