Name: Vilde's review of The Curse Girl by Kate Abery Ellison
Item: The Curse Girl
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Author: Vilde

Kate Abery Ellison

When her father tries to steal magic from the cursed mansion outside her town, seventeen-year-old Bee is the one who becomes a prisoner of the “beast” who lives there. But the so-called monster, Will, isn't anything like she expected. He's the same age as she is, he doesn't have claws or fangs ... and contrary to the local legend, he's really, really handsome.Well, maybe the whole "beast" thing is a metaphor, because he's a total jerk.Bee's only goal is to escape, but there are some major complications--like the fact that she has to break Will's curse first.The witch who cursed Will left him a riddle to solve and an hourglass to track the time. And although she'd rather eat dirt than help Will, Bee has to work with him to figure out the riddle, or she's going to remain a prisoner forever.As time goes on, Bee discovers there is more to Will than first meets the eye. She might even be falling in love with him. But the hourglass is almost empty, and they're running out of time.Can they solve a baffling riddle and break the witch's curse before everything is lost?

The Curse Girl

Andrea Ayala

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I really hate when I have to give books I like bad reviews. I really, really do. If the author is reading this, I beg of you, FIRE your editor. 

I truly believe the only thing stopping this woman being a best selling is the fact that her books aren't properly edited or polished. There are tons if little mistakes in this book. A couple of MAJOR inconsistencies. This is such a great retelling of a classic fairy tale and it had so much potential. It reads like a first draft. Part of me wonders if she even did go back and read her own work after she wrote it. I don't understand how some if the simple easy but still crucial mistakes didn't get cleaned up if age did.

Keep trying. Get a new editor. Not your friend and not your husband. 

Best self published author I've ever read. She STILL only gets two stars.

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The Curse Girl by Kate Abery Ellison

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