Relentless Considerations A Tale of Pride and Prejudice
Mr. Darcy is in love with the beautiful and witty Miss Elizabeth Bennet, but she is entirely unaware of his affections. Determined to spend more time with the beguiling young woman, Mr. Darcy decides to pay a visit to his aunt when he learns that Miss Elizabeth's cousin will soon be hosting her as a guest. As Mr. Darcy decides that he means to secure his future happiness, his cousin and dearest friend, Colonel Fitzwilliam, comes to the same realization. Seizing the opportunity to join Mr. Darcy, the colonel prepares to make a proposal of his own. Will Colonel Fitzwilliam overcome the obstacles in his path? Will Mr. Darcy find the happiness he so desperately longs for, or will his misguided assumptions forestall his chance at finding love?
Reviews
Missy Zuber @mlz2883
The idea for the story is fine. The story itself was weak. You have quotes from P&P to keep the story true to the original, but it felt historically inaccurate. Proposing marriage so soon after the death of a parent, the lack of proper behaviour at times, etc. The characters felt completely out of character and were almost felt rewritten.