
A Tinderbox in Three Acts
Reviews

(more like 3.75 but rounding up)
i recently attended a workshop on speculative diagramming led by kameelah janan rasheed and she asserted that diagrams are primarily defined by their exterior structure, flexible and fleeting. a diagram is always provisional and never authoritative. diagrams should not just be built based on how they (will) look, but on how they will be deployed/used/misused.
i would say that some of the poems here can be read visually as diagrams because they show how national ideology/propaganda is internalized, and thus can be unlearned and broken. when i made diagrams during the workshop i realized very quickly that it was much easier to fill in an existing diagram (such as for a worksheet) than to conjure one myself and imagine an alternative visual structure. some of the diagrammatic poems here represent how i feel now trying to make new diagrams, scrawling lines across the page and hoping that the information will make sense. it is easy to feel this way when your country's official record is a ghost (p.18).
Highlights

A country is a feeling. I am afraid / I understand. It might leave you / swinging, dark / exclamation mark at the end of every reason -- God, / the people, the prophets, the prospect of prosperity, peace, / the palace, the revolution, heroes of the revolution.