Holding Out
Reviews

Such a serious disappointment. I thought this would be a good series to get involved with but this book let me down. The premise of a woman with a young daughter running away from her husband and finding a new love in who could protector has me hooked. Where it went wrong was with the following 1. Insta-love. This book had the worst version of Insta-love known to book readers... There wasn't even a rhyme or reason begin their devotion. It was pure lust that escalate because they decided to bring family and friends into the mix. I mean you really don't know anything about the other person and you decide to take on their baggage 2. The writing and overuse of cursing. There is absolutely no purpose that the cursing served and it was poorly constructed. Bikers curse but come on. 3. The love scene or lack there of.... No need to discuss. 4. No character development or conclusion. All the hype build up for what? What happens to David? There isn't any face to face between talon and pick? How is violet and talons relationship before and after? Give us a build up of Deanna's life. The list could go on but I will step off my soapbox










